Talk:Hollow Timeline

2nd Dark Age Timeline additions, after the formation of the Cateran Rebels the Forsaken Knights and CR were not enemies at first, but had a peace treaty. Slit United the Elves of the Sage. Then invaded the Enchanted Kingdom and conquered it, after this the FK broke the treaty with CR. Then there was the Clan wars where CR and FK eliminated every clan in the world except for CR, FK, Flaming Claw. Then CR conquered Larket. Under an agreement with Vgfh the Flaming Claw surrendered their claim to the Xalious mountains and allowed the CR to annex it in return for a peace treaty. That is when the FK invaded Larket and two CR generals betrayed Slit, they were Jade and Lasher. After that is when the Shadow War began under the leadership of Alexander and all the conquered regions of the Cateran Empire rose up in rebellion and threw off Cateran Rule. After the conclusion of the shadow war all that CR retained was Kelay. Then FK invaded Kelay and defeated Slit and Exiled him. -- Slit

I would like this to be organized a bit more, like an actual Line, of some sort?

And fixing the grammar and punctuation would be nice too. It's pretty well written, except for the grammar and such.

'Triton' needs to be changed to 'Tritan' in the section 'The Birth of Man'. I just realized that people were spelling it two different ways, but in K's History is it written as 'Tritan'. Jacklin

Some of the dates are inconsistent, such as enchanted and sylvan alliance, and the forming of the enchanted kingdom. Derry

There are inconsistencies in capitalization of race names and a few missing commas that, on first glance, make some sentences make little sense. I had to reread a few things to actually understand what was being said. Madigan