User:Brandi

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Contents 1 Brandi's IC Description 2 Brandi's IC Biography 2.1 ~(Adopted) Family Members~ 2.2 ~Best Friends/Alliances/Allies/Shoutouts~ 2.3 ~Enemies~ 2.4 ~Undecided/No Opinion~ 2.5 ~Misses/Mourns the Loss Of~ 2.6 ~Pets(Also her Friends!)~ 2.7 ~Slaves~ 2.8 ~People she Sired~ 2.9 ~Weapons~ 2.10 ~Armor~ 2.11 ~Miscellaneous~ 2.12 ~Brandi Larter Likes/Loves/Hobbies/Respects~ 2.13 ~Brandi Larter Sclavtis Dislikes/Dispises/Hates~ 2.14 ~Triggers~ 2.15 ~Other Special Things She's Been Given~ 2.16 ~Factoids of Brandi Larter Sclavtis~ 2.17 Few Comments on Brandi 2.18 Lyrics/Poems 3 Brandi's OOC Description 3.1 ~Shoutouts~ 3.2 Unforgettable Administrative Messages 4 Brandi' OOC Contact Info 5 Duels and Spars past and present 5.1 Duels 5.2 Spars 6 Other 7 Other

Brandi's IC Description

"What would an Angel say the Devil wants to know, No Good without Evil, No love without Hate, no Virtue without Sin, no Life without Death, no Miracle without Tragedy, no Grace without Lust, no order without Chaos, no light without Darkness, no stability without Corruption, all these things must go hand in hand with each other as this world must be cleansed in the forge of Chaos with the searing flames of Darkness!"

Statistics Sheet

Full Name:Brandi Larter

Titles/Nicknames:Most call her "The Blood Countess",and The Smoking Siren.

Race:Pure-Blooded Vampiress[Admin Approved] (You will see this when you look at her also!)

Sub-Race:Unknown, even to this chaotic female herself!

Class:Arch Priestess of Delisha (You will see this when you look at her as well!)

Sub-Class:Shadow Sagess

NOTE:Just when you think you know what here true races and classes are, you don't via the Chaos stuff! *evil laughter*

PvP-Class:Death Knight(Working with Kenneth to switching to Ranger class!)

Gender:Female

Age:Only females are allowed to know!

Weight:Only females are allowed to know!

Height:Only females are allowed to know!

Agrression Level:Extremely Aggressive

Intelligence Level:Extremely Intelligent

Magic Rating:Mystical

Strength Rating:Strong

Speed Rating:Very fast

NOTE:She is a Jane of all trades, she can Arpee heal, she is very good in all her aspects but not the best at a certain one aspect so you know!

Skin Color:Red Corrupted Chaos Looks (Her Skin can change anywhere from Hot Pink to Crimson Red now!)-It changes colors and looks so its shifty!

Eye Color:Flaming Green Chaos Looks (They can shift and Change Colors and configurations)

Hair Color:Black Tangled Chaos Looks (Still long the way it was but with the Chaos changing, it is now curly and has lost its streaks and is just now all Black!)-It changes colors and looks so its shifty!

Favorite Color:Black

Markings:The "MM" logo representing her place and leadership within the Mischievous madams

Apprentice(s):Blue, Peku, and Damonn

Current Quest:Planning on making a secretive Clan as we speak as well as a secretive Traveling Nation, she figured "Oh What the hell, why try and rule a nation when you can make your very own!", also busy with her relationship with her lover and girlfriend whom she sired a few months back in the feline (now vampiress) Sammi

Relationship Status:Smitten with the feline woman named Sammi whom she recently Sired

Spouse:A feline woman named Sammi who she recently sired.

Orientation:What would be the orientation of a female who only likes other females, hmmm?

Alignment:Chaotic Evil, However she has a Heart for females only!

Clan:In The process of planning to create one as we speak *its gonna be a secret!* (ooc note-this clan will be only known to its members and not known icly in hollow to outsiders so dont go mixing ic and ooc, and yes you will see the clan's name on the who list, but you dont and wont know it icly, and of course the diety of choice will be Delisha!) OOC NOTE-IF YOU WANT TO BE A PART OF THIS "SECRET" THEN HMAIL AND SECRETLY TALK WITH BRANDI, VASHA, OR SAMMI!

Role In Clan:Wouldn't you like to know!

Coven:In the process of an all female Vampiress coven as we speak!

Family/House Name:House of the Larter

Role in Family/House:Grand Matron/Head

Guild Group:None yet

Role in Guild Group:None

Gang Cult:Mischievous madams

Role in Gang Cult:Leader of Mischievous madams OOC NOTE-IF YOU WISH TO JOIN, GET IN TOUCH WITH BRANDI OR BIANCA!

Will:The Will of Darkness and Feminism, and the will of the Dark Mother Delisha!

Divus/Vocation/Deity:The Dark Mother Delisha

Powers/Skills:Wouldn't you Like to know!

Immunities/Strength(s):Everything Else mostly!

Weakness(es)/Weak Points:Females, Women, and Girls!

Home:Unknown, but is planning on making her own secret nation, one that has never bneen heard of in hollow, its a secret

Favorite Character(s):Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li(Which is her best Friend and the one who gave her the Credits, and sadly, She left for a long time. *Cries*, but now she is back, and like Brandi, she underwent a change and also like Brandi is not the same person she once was and Brandi is fine with that!), Queen Britta Lynn Larter-Mancini/Brit(A sweet new friend who seeked me and I'm glad for it too, she reminds me of Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li in a way, Later on becomes Brandi's adopted Sister, the two eternally bound to one another, then becomes Queen of Venturil.), Jolene Baptista/Jojo, Lady Lynn Sclavtis/Lilly, , Natia Ferantay(Brandi's lurvee now Deceased!), Druecillia(Brandi's new Vampiress lover!), and the Child she wishes were her daughter, Layla!

Person She would most like to meet:Any other Females she has not yet Met!

Preference:Females

Placement:Wouldn't you like to Know!

Chosen Ascendi:Astrala

Chosen Goddess:The Dark Mother Delisha

Chosen Idol:Lady Jade, The Goddess of Hell

• Regained all she knows and is supposed to be back, She will attack from behind, In secret, without warning, without being provoked, without being Insulted, when Insulted, when another female is attacked, when angered and without reason and with reason!

• It has been said and Rumored that she has a very high opinion of herself, all females, and her clan, it has also been said that she has abused, tortured, or even killed several Males without reason, and has favored Females over Males, it has been said that she has treated Males harsh and Cruel for no reason, also been said that she would not help a poor male, she helps poor females and any females, its also been said that she is an In-Charge lady craving power, she has been rumored to have been accused of these such acts and more.

• Has overcome her past fears and weaknesses of Dragon Blood and Lycan Blood and uses them to her advantage.

Brandi's IC Biography

~(Adopted) Family Members~

• Sammi=Girlfiend/Lover/Sireling
• Matron Malice La'Ru Tyr'Anea=Adopted Mother(Missing!)
• Druecillia(Girlfriend/Lover)
• Lady Lynn Sclavtis/Lilly(The Lady of Twighlight)=Adopted Sister(Missing?)
• Odette=Adopted Sister(Missing?)
• Queen Beata DeSange/Bea=Adoptive Aunt
• Rolan=Adoptive Uncle(Queen Beata Desange's Brother)[Kinda getting pissed off and fed up with this one due to him still in the clan that does him nothing but wrong!]
• Queen Britta Lynn Larter-Mancini/Brit=Adopted Sister(Queen of Venturil)[Dead!]
• Uiverdian Wynmoor/Uvvy=Adopted Niece(Lynn's Daughter)-Missing?
• Colette=Adopted Niece(Princess of the Serpent City of Alithyra)[Dead!]
• Saeria=Adopted Sister
• Alandria Larter=Adopted Sister
• Artemis Ryllone=Adopted Brother(Missing?)
• Princess Arnatuile DeSange=Adopted Cousin(Through Beata)
• Mitzi=Adopted Cousin
• Gavin=Adopted Cousin-In-Law(Arnatuile's Husband)
• Sarah Darksoul=Adopted Daughter
• Miley Larter=Adopted Niece(Found by Jolene Baptista, Brandi later made Miley Jolene's permanent Daughter, the two and Bianca share her indeed!)[Sdaly deceased due to Disease!]
• Alena and Amelie=[Adoptive] Twin Granddaughters(Sarah's twin daughters)
• Demetri=[Adoptive] Grandson(Sarah's newest Son, this was discovered when Brandi remembered Sarah)
• Draco=[Adoptive] Grandson(Sarah's son)
• Morgana=[Adoptive] Granddaughter(Sarah's Daughter)
• Simaria=[Adoptive] Sister

NOTE:Even though they are not such yet, This Bloody Countess considers Jolene Baptista and Bianca Baptista as Sister-like figures to her indeed, and Considers Layla a daughter!

~Best Friends/Alliances/Allies/Shoutouts~

• Serina(Yup, shes back from the dead! *Woot!*)
• Alysia Hope Celaril and Lily Anne-Marie Celaril (NPC)
• The Lich Queen Ryeanna Drakenhart(Shes the Lich Goddess in Brandi's eyes, and to Brandi is the only true Lich, shes also the only one Brandi will acknowledge or Recognize as a Lich!)
• Noemi Yakata
• Cerinii
• Larue, The Familiar
• Kalid
• Alicia
• Belaryl
• Kylie
• Dezerae Henoko/Deze
• Jolene Baptista/JoJo(She helped get Brandi back to where she needs to be) & Bianca Teagan Baptista
• Maere
• Lieza
• Adonia
• Nymle
• Evangeline
• Arcadian "SQUEE" Delavian
• Alaynya
• Zoey Ama Aga Wolfe (My Lycaness Queen)
• Faythe
• Ciaran Leia Donnave
• Layla
• Jaize(The only Naga that Brandi knows of that is left!)
• Inari
• Teiko
• Vasha
• Ramsi
• Rowen
• Loque
• Shanelle
• Sade
• Audrielle DeMurre
• Afrikaisi/Afri
• Joanna Elfwood
• Qnairou
• Aarika Legwen
• Lydia Pyress
• Tári Elensar
• Illarinae
• Lady Valaria Lyastri/Val
• Veila
• Charis, The Red Dragoness
• Arysel Kodan
• Peku
• Sairalinde Elanesse
• Lady Iris Serias
• Elly
• Martina
• Mirshann Suru D'Chath/Wynter(Cuttest person I've ever Met and I so Adore You!)
• Deidre Lillian McKenna
• Salt
• Chelspire
• Maiah
• Damonn
• Haydai(I hope I spelled it right!?)
• Yukri
• Tyrenes/TyTy(She calls me the Flower Queen)
• Jaella Nay Damali
• Kristos Delavian, The Golden Dragon of Chaos
• Gwenilyn/Gwen & Valkor
• Licentia
• Astrum
• Hayvin
• Celestrial
• Myrall Stronghammer
• Kade Veneno
• Clea
• Terra
• Annaya, and Kalina Drakenheart
• Xerelle
• Eyren Sahtya Thaerie
• Astrid
• Simaria Emile De' Amoren
• Tanya Ne'hatir
• Akane(Shadow)
• Shyim
• Olveria
• Miko
• Dominil
• Sophie Darkheart
• Aerial
• Rhoswen
• Awne Tora
• Alice
• Thora
• Tashina
• Blue
• Imogen
• Everyone in the Mischievous madams!
• And All of the Admin!
• Rrisee(Lover-Deceased-Sireling)
• Kenneth
• Sammi(Current Lover-Sireling)
• Vixon
• Soonen
• Embre
• Talisia Noriah Rose

~Enemies~

• This new version of the Black Lotus, to her its not the Black Lotus that she helped build, to her now the clan has been ruined, this will stand as long as she is out of the Black Lotus and not a leader and to Current members of the clan!
• Vlektu
• Vakarash
• Coreliant
• Shaelus/Solaris and all of his followers
• Skylei
• Rheven=Hates for many reasons, and to her he is no Archmage!
• And ALL Males!
• And everyone that Bothers Jolene Baptista and Bianca Teagan Baptista!
• Any and all enemies of The Mischievous madams are Sworn Enemies of hers!
• Whoever murdered her last lover Rrisee

~Undecided/No Opinion~

~Misses/Mourns the Loss Of~

• Mistress Natia Ferantay(Brandi's previous Fiancee, over a long stretch, Natia was missing, Brandi began to worry and stuffs, ond day she indeed found out that Natia was indeed dead, she will forever be missed but not forgotten!)
• Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li-Yup she left again, prolly for good sadly,(This woman is like a sister to Me, She Is My very best friend and She is also the one who gave me these Credits, Sadly She Left! *Cries*, but then many a month later she came back, apparently like Brandi, she underwent a change also, but sadly she left again sadly!)
• Zytka(The woman being a Teacher/Mentor to Brandi, she may be harsh at times, but Brandi know why she was as she wanted to better everyone, sadly she's turned into a Tree, she will be missed but never forgotten! *Cries*)
• Keria(Dead!, Another sweet friend, she will forever be missed but not forgotten, met her through Miko by the way!)
• Nathifa Sheriti(Tyrenes/TyTy calls her the Flower Princess, she was currently under Brandi’s protection, however, she is either Missing, Dead, or has turned into a Tree?!)
• Syrenia/Syren(Missing or Dead?!)
• Mahteth(Dead!)
• Errin(Dead!)
• Vaeri Ixen Thurkear (Vit)-Brandi's {Dark} Sister[Good at Editing Pics for IC, OOC, and Creating Clan Logos and she charges only 200 gold per pic, Either Missing or Dead?!]
• Jolene Baptista/Jojo(Many reasons)
• Druecillia(Another lover dead)
• Rrisee(Last lover she had and second one she sired on Rrisee's request)

• Send a Tell or an HMail if you were missed(Under the appropriate Category, since all of you on this bio are my Friends/Family, unless you happen to be an Enemy!)

~Pets(Also her Friends!)~

• A Hamster named Valerya(Given to her by Ginger, Brandi gave her to Mirshann Suru D'Chath.)
• A Nightmare named Slepnyr(Brandi found this in the Streets of Vailkrin and decided to take her in, she has ever since been loyal to Brandi.)
• A Dog named Tyr(A special gift given to her by Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li, now in the hands of the lovely Zytka Avineir.)
• A Gray Wolf named Astaray(This was one of the Farewell Presents given to Brandi from Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li before she left hollow.)
• A Hamster named Zink(Given to her by her sister, Britta Lynn Larter/Brit in the mines, He takes Valeryn's place as she is with Mirshann Suru D'Chath now, He has been loyal to Brandi and her friends, she later gave him to a masked woman named Silvia as a pet!)
• An Undead Crow named Karausuman(This is an Evil gift from Brandi's sister Britta, however, Brandi also learned that Karausuman was this crow's name and it was once the Demon Lord of the Ravens, however, it is unable to revert to it's Demon Lord form due to multiple circumstances, but Brandi will figure out a way someday!)
• A Vampiress Amazon whose name I'm not gonna even tell ya, since she chooses to never give out her name so Brandi will let it remain so as well
• An Albino Bat named Abysteel(Brandi later gave her to Odette as a buddy for her Bunny!)
• A Black Wolf named Xynoxette
• A Drowess-Vampiress named Obliterator [And yes that is her Name!]-(When you look at her it says "Drow Slave" this was a gift given to her by Nasurate her brother at the time, he was unable to control her/get it right, but Brandi had no problem as she ordered her Vampiress Amazon to sire this drow woman, and this Drowess-Vampiress has the best of both worlds and there you goes!)
• A Horse given to her by Joanna Elfwood during this current Brandi Memory-Power loss story, etc...
• The Hell Wyrm
• Mutated Chaos Hound named Lady Quimira(In due time!)

~Slaves~

• None as of yet, even though she is of the belief that all Males should be slaves or DIE!

~People she Sired~

• Nasurate(Deceased!)
• Rrisee(Girlfriend/Lover-Deceased)
• Sammi(Girlfriend/Lover)

~Weapons~

• Shifty Cards(Marked Card-Deck)-[This is Brandi's trademark and main weapon, it is also her favorite and weapon of Choice, long ago, Vaeri Ixen Thurkear gave her a Marked Card-Deck, however this is not your normal playing card deck as would be entailed throught Brandi's history as time went on, She would find out that these were in fact Cards that shifted into other Objects, Objects that Brandi beckons, and she can summon Multiples of thee cards at one time as well, at first, they appear as your average normal playing Poker Cards to anybody, but on her commands, these cards can shift into many different objects for a huge number of attacks or Combos, what else and other secrets and futures might these Mysterious cards of this pure-blooded vampiress hold?, well that's anybody's guess!]
• The Staff-Scythe Inaba(Coming in Time!)

~Armor~

• Shield:Heavily armoured sleeve
• Face:Visor of Eternal Dark
• Head:Black full-face Helmet
• Left Ear:Symbol of Chekari
• Right Ear:Symbol of Chekari
• Neck:Token-Of-Love
• Shoulders:Mantle of Chaos
• Body:blue-silk poets-blouse
• Left Arm:blue-silk sleeve
• Right Arm:black-robe sleeve
• Left Wrist:thunder-rune bracelet
• Right Wrist:thunder-rune bracelet
• Hands:Spiky Chaotic Guantlets
• Right Finger:nothing
• Left Finger:runic ring
• Legs:Meterioric Iron Leggings
• Feet:Spiked boots of Chaos

~Miscellaneous~

• Portrait of Britta named Sammi(This is made for the memory of the person who she held to the highest esteem, her late sister Britta!, but when you 'look' at Brandi, she always has this, but the truth is, it always stays at where she currently lives most times, sometimes Brandi can feel Britta's spirit imminate and sometimes they may be talking to each other in Brandi's mind, who knows!)=You people know why I named this portrait of britta the name it has.

~Brandi Larter Likes/Loves/Hobbies/Respects~

• Sammi!
• Druecillia
• ALL Females and Feminism, including Dieties!
• Jolene Baptista/Jojo
• Anyone bearing the Baptista name!
• The Lady of Twighlight Lady Lynn Sclavtis/Lilly
• Mistress Natia Ferantay
• Layla
• Her Family
• Slavery and any Slavers
• Arpeeing
• Archmosia
• Illusions
• The Shadows
• Chaos
• Chaos Stuff
• Chaos Shards
• Chaos Weapons
• Chaos Armor
• Chaos Equipment
• Chaos Looks
• Smoking
• Darkness
• Killing Males
• When males die!
• When bad things happen to ALL Males!
• When good things happen to ALL Females!
• Women and Females(Especially and mostly Evil ones!)
• Having her Hair played with by other Females/Playing with other Females Hair
• Having other Women flirt with her
• Jewelry
• Animals and Pets
• Female Children
• Cuddling
• Any Special Alchohol(With her favorites being Blood Wine, Brandy, and Tequila!)
• Heavy Drinking and Heavy Smoking with other Females!
• Flowers(With her Favorites being the Heather, Black Rose, and Black Cala-Lily)
• Sweets(Preferably Chocolate)
• To be In Charge!
• Spiders
• Magic
• Darkness
• Spikes/Spiked Covered Things
• Tattoos
• To Give and to Help when she can (only to females and her clan)
• To Learn from Others, To Learn More, and Learn from her Mistakes
• To get better in certain areas
• The Lyastri Estate and The Lyastri/Suru D'Chath Family And Their History
• Lady Lynn Sclavtis's Manor
• Seriena's and Colette's Enchanted Cottage
• The Hanging Corpse Tavern
• Playing
• Parties
• Music
• Dancing
• Taking Advice
• Standing up for others
• To help others when she can
• To Babysit her friends Children when she can
• Help in her RP.
• Her Fellow Clan Members
• The old Black Lotus
• Dark Brethren
• Apostles of Fate
• The new Vlos Lustrous under Kristos
• Oddly enough even though this totally contradicts the Blood Countess, she has respect for Jolene Baptista's clan Providence, even though it is strange!
• Vaeri Ixen Thurkear's Pic Editing Magic
• Her Friends (If female or in the clan)
• People's Wishes
• Mischievous madams
• Her Blood Schylla
• The Admin

~Brandi Larter Sclavtis Dislikes/Dispises/Hates~

• YOU! IF YOU ARE MALE!
• The new Black Lotus, mostly Aldred Frost
• ALL males of all races including Dieties!
• The Ascendi Olric, and Kanos
• The God Cyris
• Forsaken Knights except for Ciadra and Jade
• Anyone bearing the Noriah name after past events, except for Talisia and Sairalinde, most notably hates Kenji and Talim!!
• Good and Holy!
• When females die!
• When males live!
• Taking orders from anyone, especially males!
• Vampires, Lycans, and Undead that are male!
• The So-Called Text
• Covens and Packs that allow males to be in them unless all the males are slaves and Women Rule!
• All the Enemies of and Anyone who lies to, mistreats, harms and hurts the following people or Things: Her Adopted Sister Lady Lynn Sclavtis and her Lovely Manor, Her other Adopted Sister Odette, Her other Adopted Sister Saeria, Her Adopted Daughter Sarah and her family, Her Nieces Uiverdian Wynmoor and Miley Larter, Noemi Yakata, Jolene Baptista, Natia Ferantay, etc... and Layla [Enemies of these people are also enemies of Brandi as well!]
• Kelay Tavern(Stupid, idiotic, Too Crowded, always lost in the Shuffle!)-She almost never goes there anymore!
• People who pick on/hurt/mistreat Women and her Family(And with the moods changing she may hurt and/or kill people who do it to women.)
• Most Mining(Unless it is to get what she needs/wants)
• Rude/Grumpy/Disrespectful People
• People who break the rules
• Drama/Gossip
• When She Misspells Words
• Jealousy
• Her Mistakes
• All of the Male Ascendi
• All of the Gods
• Torchlight Rebels(Yes the Entire Clan!)
• Most of her Former clan Gisiae en adon
• Bad Lag of any Kind, Especially Computer lag

~Triggers~

• When she loses a friend and/or she sees one of her best friends cry, She cries along with them to share the pain and make it fair, but however, Brandi doesn't let either her or the others be down, but only makes them Stronger.
• When Angry, her eyes change to a hellish Blazing Fiery Red.

~Other Special Things She's Been Given~

• A Magical Cloak(This was given to her by Seriena in her very short stint iin the Sect of Coreliant, she will always remember as she calls Seriena a goddess!)
• A Bone Ring(Another gift from Seriena given to her in her short stay in the Sect of Coreliant, after Seriena died, Brandi magically enchanted this during the Vigil in her loving memory!)
• A Runic Ring(One of the Farewell Gifts given by Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li before leaving hollow for a very long time.)
• Two Obsidian Earrings(Both of which were given to her By Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li as a farewell gift before she left hollow for a long time, Brandi will treasure these forever.)
• Two Thunder-Rune Bracelets(See Two Obsidian Earrings.)
• Thunder Rune Tower Shield(A Magical Shield given to Brandi by Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li as a farewell shield before her departure from hollow for a long period of time, she gave this to Salt later on when Brandi got a better shield, a Heavily Armoured Sleeve, of course of which Brandi cursed it.)
• Troll Hide Greaves(Special Leggings from Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li as a farewell gift before leaving Hollow for a long time, Brandi will more than likely always wear these.)

~Factoids of Brandi Larter Sclavtis~

• Is Power Hungry and an In-Charge Lady
• Is a total Bitch, she snaps, one could say she is Bipolar!
• She is extremely sweet and nice to Females and would do things for them!
• She is extremely Rude to Males, if one were to shake hands she would rip it off indeed!
• Is a Paladin, not a Death Knight!
• Absolutely Hates being called a Death Knight!
• Hates Almost All Males, Especially those of the following races: Vampires, Lycans, and Undead.
• Hates Covens and Packs that include men unless they are slaves and the Women rule!
• Is sick of Kelay Tavern for lots of reasons and hardly ever goe there anymore.
• Due to recent events, has become untrusting with almost all Male Lycans, Male Vampires, and Male Undead.
• Has become Inseperable with her best friends, Her Sister Lady Lynn Sclavtis/Lilly, The Lady of Twighlight and her sisterly like friend Jolene Marie Monroe/Jojo, as well as her Fiancee Talim!
• Betrays Males for Females alot!(I.E.:She backstabs Males to side with Females alot!)
• Likes to Humiliate Opponents and Enemies after defeating them by putting a Humanoid skull and an Exaggerated-Steel Codpiece(And yes there is an item called that) on them afterwards.
• Is a Slaver and proudly admits to it.
• Almost all of her plans are kept secret.
• Knows even the most Evil of Villainesses must do some Good to achieve their goals.
• Has once again destroyed the Gisiae en adon Headquarters and stole the stuff.
• Only Duels, Fights, Spars, and Brawls with Females, but will beat up and kill Men!
• Can (And Sometimes Does) Arpee in tells, Clan talk, whispers, and H-Mails!
• Is a Bone-Shredder AND a Soul Eater(Yes and that's Bad folks!)
• Outside of her family and females and her clan, there is not many that she trusts anymore.
• Hates the Male species with passions!
• Has been a little heart broken and somewhat bitter as of late, and to add to that, she has now taken up Smoking.
• Makes offerings at the Doorstep of the Lyastri Estate for Lady Atropos Lyastri(who she has yet to meet)
• Is way more Friendly with Females than Males.
• Does not trust any men outside of her family or clan.
• Cuts all ties with All dieties and has a deep rooted hatred for the male ones, will not worship a diety but respects all the female dieties.
• Is usually one if the most very Arpee friendliest people, so do not be shy!
• Admits that she needs help and work in her Arpee.
• Would like to learn how to Arpee Duel More (Regular Duel, not Death Duel because she Doesn't and will not Death Duel) and Spar.
• One could also say that Brandi could also be a Feminist as well, for she trusts females and worships them and does not trust many men and no male dieties, maybe except the Dark ones.

Few Comments on Brandi

"Brandi is a sexy creature of the dark, a mystery among all females. What lies beneath her captivating crimson eyes is anyone's guess. She is to be feared and respected at all times, and I'm honored not only to be her sister, but her friend as well." ~Queen Britta

"Brandi...Truth be told, I'm not quite sure what to make of her. I consider a friend, a woman of grace and intelligence, and yet...I would advise you be wary of her. She can be very a persuasive, and I suspect she is gathering followers for something. I will not lie to you, she is evil to a T, but never-the-less has been a good friend to myself, so I am prepared to over-look her...Less respectful deeds," ~Nasurate

"Brandi was one of the people who welcomed me to hollow when I started out and has been helpful throughout my adventures." ~Annaya

"Always giving out her sweet kisses. That's Brandi!" ~Aerial

"Brandi ..huh... Well she is a character for you. From anything from parties to mayhem you can find her, but beware she can whoop some serious ass." ~Soroni Dynastel Croventual

Brandi is a friendly yet rather evil girl she is someone you would rather have as a friend than an enemy.."-Beata

"You want to know my opinion on the Beautiful Brandi? Yes? All right... I guess I'll tell you exactly what I think of her then." Pausing, the platinum blonde clicks her tongue against her lips and smiles wickedly. "I love that woman, she's something like a sister to me and I'd risk my life for her. She's also one of my dearest troublemakers, someone I consider a close confidant. Does that answer your question?" A daring look was awarded to her onlooker, the female rising from her chair. "I have things to do, and evil plans to make..." ---Jolene Monroe

a devishlly sweet women with a heart gold and blood as black as night. Not scared to kick ass when ass needs kicking.-Sakue

Lady Brandi Larter is one of the strongest I have ever faced. She is a good ally and friend to have, yet an even greater enemy. I suggest to all that you stay on her good side.-Kenji Hitokiri

Such a naughty girl-Peku

If I had to describe Brandi I'd say that she was insanity trapped in a beautiful box just waiting for something to free it, another thing I've gotten from her is the feeling of a more relaxed personality that considers what she's doing before hand, if I had to label you I'd say your a lawful evil vampiress, for you are just shy of slipping into the purity that is evil.-Artemis Ryllone

She's a vampiress, and though the lycan shouldn't associate herself with those creatures Brandi has a certain allure that can't be denied with her charisma though the lycan knows not much of her other than she likes to refer to her as Dark Queenie.-Zoey

One of my dearest friends. Love her bunches!-Bianca

Talim is in love with Brandi. She thinks highly of Brandi, and does what she can to appease Brandi-Talim

Someone that he can relax with and doesn't mind being her blood bank-Rolan

(Feel free to add to here your charry's view and blurb on Bandi if you have not already!)

Lyrics/Poems

LYRICS 1: I want to fly into your sun Need faith to make me numb Live like a teenage Christ I'm a saint, got a date with suicide

Oh Mary, Mary To be this young is oh so scary Mary, Mary To be this young I'm oh so scared I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell

You never said forever, could ever hurt like this You never said forever, could ever hurt like this

Spin my way out of hell, there's nothing left this soul to sell

Live fast and die fast too How many times to do this for you? How many times to do this for you?

Mary, Mary To be this young I'm oh so scared I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell

You never said forever, could ever hurt like this You never said forever, could ever hurt like this

I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell

Long hard road, out of hell

I wanna live, I wanna love But it's a long hard road, out of hell

Sell my soul for anything, anything but you Sell my soul for anything, anything but you

LYRICS 2: I tell you how I feel, but you dont care. I say tell me the truth, but you dont dare. You say love is a hell you cannot bare. And I say gimme mine back and then go there - for all I care.

I got my feet on the ground and I dont go to sleep to dream. You got your head in the clouds and youre not at all what you seem. This mind, this body, and this voice cannot be stifled by your deviant ways. So dont forget what I told you, dont come around, I got my own hell to raise.

I have never been insulted in all my life. I could swallow the seas to wash down all this pride. First you run like a fool just to be at my side. And now you run like a fool, but you just run to hide, and I cant abide.

I got my feet on the ground and I dont go to sleep to dream. You got this head in the clouds and youre not at all what you seem. This mind, this body, and this voice cannot be stifled by your deviant ways. So dont forget what I told you, dont come around, I got my own hell to raise.

Dont make it a big deal, dont be so sensitive. Were not playing a game anymore, you dont have to be so defensive. Dont you plead me your case, dont bother to explain. Dont even show me your face, cuz its a crying shame. Just go back to the rock from under which you came. Take the sorrow you gave and all the stakes you claim - And dont forget the blame. I got my feet on the ground and I dont go to sleep to dream. You got this head in the clouds and youre not at all what you seem. This mind, this body, and this voice cannot be stifled by your deviant ways. So dont forget what I told you, dont come around, I got my own hell to raise.

Brandi's OOC Description

Facts about me and what I do and do not do

• I Do NOT, and I repeat Do NOT Death Duel(DD), so DO NOT ask and do not challenge me to one!, but will do Spars, Duels, Brawls, and Fights, However I do Romance Duel(RD) if there is really such a thing from what I hear.
• I do Arpee in tells, say, Clan Talk, and H-Mail.
• My character is psychic and telepathic so I do take tells ICly.
• I always have my OOC Channel turned in the OFF Position Button Permanently, now and forever, so if you wanna talk about OOC things, do it in HMail, tells, and other stuff.

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*IMPORTANT*-----------

• Duels and Spars with me fighting in them WILL NO LONGER, AND I REPEAT NO LONGER BE JUDGED!, To me, the way it's been and the way I see it, if you have to have your Duel Judged or have to rely on Judges, then all you prove to me is that you can't do it on your own and can't Arpee or Duel or Spar on your own by having Judges and Assistance so If you are gonna involve Judges, Do not even bother asking Me, because it proves to me the weakness and the fact that you are incapable of doing such on your own!, but the Duels and Spars can be noteworthy though, I may however Judge a duel maybe even though asking and wanting it judged just proves those points even more, so if you are expecting a Judged Duel or Spar with me, well then FORGET ABOUT IT and BITE ME BECAUSE IT AIN'T GONNA HAPPEN THAT WAY, SO YEAH GET LOST!

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• Is a feminist, since My Character is female, she will only duel females!
• Just because my Character is Evil, do not be shy, I am one of the most Arpee frriendly people and am very nice and caring, way unlike my Character!
• I Love to Arpee, and love to have help in improving my Arpee and any other that needs it!
• I am not a new person, but I am still learning ropes!
• My character loves meeting females, women, and girls and always loves to meet more indeed, alignment does not matter to her indeed since she has a soft spot for females of all walks of life despite her chaotic evil personna!
• People who are rude get put on My Ignore list and get Ignored by Me!
• I DO and I DON'T take this game seriously even though it is by far my favorite game ever!
• Has spelling Errors!
• The only Reason I stat is to get Gold!
• If you are on of those players that are Rude and Grumpy and Torment others, don't even bother!
• Try to not mix IC with OOC, I know it can be hard, I've even done it a few times, but at least try, if you do it especially too much, I'll knock yer block off lol!
• I can find Piccahs for free, but It is your responsability to get the artist's permission I'm afraid, I rather just make the piccie myself free of charge!
• Don't hesitate to ask me for help on your Bios and/or Wiki pages, trust me, I can help people out with theirs.
• I was born in Toronto, Ontario-Canada, but I live in Knoxville, Tennessee, and yes I do smoke and drink lol!
• I like Female Artists and stuffs, I like Heavy Metal, Alternative, Hard Rock, and Hardcore music as usually my favorites, I like the likes of: Kittie, Flyleaf, Lacuna Coil, Paramore, Madonna, Fiona Apple, Garbage, Hole, sneaker pimps, Lords of Acid, The Distillers, OTEP, and many more!
• I like sports, almost any sport, especially Football, Softball, Soccer, Volleyball and bunches more!
• I perfer Women over Men by a large margin, so if you are not down with that, well, that's life lol!
• I admit I have a guge fondness for Animals, I am a huge animal lover!

~Shoutouts~

• Noemi:MY adorable feline girl, what can I say, she can be jut like Brandi, sweet one second, and destructive the next hehe, I claims her lol!
• Alysia:My favorite Pix, should be the queen of all the Pixies, I adore her, Lily, and their Beautiful wings, messing with them will result in your Death, my pixies!
• Natia:My Dryad, My Tree, and My Lover!, MINE!, MINE!, MINE!, ya'll hear!, All MINE!, She and I have Full Claimage over each other ICly and OOCly to no end!, Brandi's Tree and Dryad, so hands off!, Ya I know you are Jealous, but too Bad lol! MINE! MINE! MINE! MIIIIIIIIIIIIINE!
• Britta:Proud to be IC sisters and By far my favie, wish she was my ooc sister also, she is nice and willing to bring smiles to people's faces and is the best! You hurt her or make her cry, your arse is gonna pay!, got it! And you had best WORSHIP her!
• Laeli:Where would I have been and what would have I done without you, I wish she was my sister
• Mirshann/Wynter:The Cutest Character on hollow, both as a child and as an Adult, and is nice as both!
• Rumiko/Nasrin:OMG! there's also alot I could say about this doll, just can't think of it, very deserving ruler of the enchanted Kingdom as well, too bad she's away though.
• Dominil:What can I say, Gentlewoman I guess.
• Bianca:What a sweetheart, brings a smile to people, you hurt and harm her, you won't like it!
• Valaria:Just plain Awesomeness, ya hear!
• Beata:Sweet as can be, and She's My Wifey, Brandi<3 her, and I do not and will not share her either, Worship her IMMEDIATLY or else, Messing with her will result In your Doom!
• Malice:My Epic Drowess, Just plain Awesomeness, I steals her, Mess with this Bitch and you Die ya hear!!
• Lynn:She's my fav and I'm hers, Plain and Simple!, Got That, My official Lady of Twighlight!, Glad to be her IC sister, she's like a sister all around to me, She always brings a smile to my face no matter the situation, Mess with her and you will face my Wrath! MINE MINE ALL MINE!
• Distraite:What can I say, Lovely and Cool all at once, and one hell of an Arpeer, just Uber Awesomness!
• Agoyoanye:My Wannabe Dark Mistress!
• Saeria:Awesomness, I wish she was my OOC sister as well, mess with her and you will be in Eternal Pain!
• Tetsumi & Laurelle:My Favorite Couple other than Brandi and Natia, just two legends who are awesome in all ways!
• Jolene:No matter what the case anytime, she is an absolute Arpeeing Doll, in any length of Arpees, no matter wether your character is befriending or defiling or indifferent to and with Jolene, you better respect her and her Arpee skills, because this Blonde can really Go at It, oh and she is totally mine and I'm absolutly Her Mistress, nuff said. I > 333333333 her, so hands off, Obey her or I'll tear ya up in shreads!, 'Nuff Said, that is all there is to it, got it, worship her at all times as she is my true Goddess!
• Veila:Just an absolute Doll! *Eyes her 24/7*
• Hanna:She claims me as I am her Kitty lol, her dark Sexy Kitty, That's right Bitches!, be jealous!, We are each other's Property! *nods*
• Sarah:Proud to be her IC mother big time, wish she was my OOC daughter as well, the Cutie!
• Peku:Awwww my Dark Emporess and wanna be Black Dragoness pet!
• Blue:I so adore you, you are too cute, and one of my favourite Colours!
• Uiverdian:An absolute Dollface and the bestest Contortionist ever, bow to her and worship her talents at all times, you mess with her and it will be your downfall, got that!
• Layla:I cannot express this doll face enough, there are many side to her that I just love, she may be a child according to some, but lemme tell you, she is no normal Child, she can Arpee like no one's business!
• Shaelyn:This gal cn come up with ideas and add to storylines like no ones guess, I think her for helping in a past storyline, I adores her so. *bows*
• Qnairou:The Q brings Qs to me as I enjoy Arpeeing with her, her "Arrow" can go through me anyday, and she can prove it lol, oh yeah and she has claimed me as her official "Bunni!" she says so herself lol!
• Loque:The awesome female Walking Corpse, you mess with this corpse and I tear you a brand new one indeed!
• Arnatuile:I adore this cutie both OOCly and ICly for many reason, shes a sweetie, you mess wit her, I will tear you to shreads, you hear me!
• Serina:This chick is Hot and I adores her so, and shes back from the dead and Brandi's proud, She's mine and you cannot have her, you can think shes' yours but in truth, this Chick is Mine and Mines alone, I only share with other Females lol!
• Larue:Oh countless things I could say, I claims, her, steals her, and owns her as well.
• Ryeanna:An Awesome Admin, Awesome friend, and An Awesome Arpeer, she is just legendary in every way you could think of, shes my Lich Queen, and I steals her and claim her shes mine, get the point, and her Chaos thingies rock hardcore as well!
• Kristos:The legendary Golden Dragon of Chaos and what hell of an arpeer as well, his legacy knows no bounds and kicks ass like no one's business!
• Druecillia:She is mine and I am hers and that is all to it Yeah!
• Aldred:Can you say Kick ass arpeer?, when Brandi lost her memories Layla picked the perfect choice for a leader and Brandi is pleased, even though she is on her quest to get hers back, she would have him stay a leader since he helped the clan lots, and he kicks ass arpeeing style too and adds more to the clan!
• Korike:Aye, another big part of the clan, a great arpeer to have as well, was also recruited during Brandi's memory/power loss storyline, a very dark one indeed, even though Brandi only made him darker, much props to the Kor!
• The Entire Black Lotus Clan:Oh what can I say, the clan that I helped started in Britta's memory, she would be oooh so damn proud, this clan rocks, is best at arpeeing with, my favorite group of Arpeers, this clan just owns me and Kicks Ass arpee style and I could not be prouder, plus it is the most CHAOTIC EVIL clan ever, and I will remain here forever indeed, I enjoy being Member and enjoyed being a Leader and want to get that back, so guys, keep up the kick ass arpees we are the best, let's take over the enire Solar System!
• Asher:You talk about meeting new friends, she is a sweetie, however like myself do not anger or else, harm this dollface and I swear it will be much than hell for ya, ya dig?
• The Entire Mischievous Madams Gang:Yuppers my Secondary Main source of Arpeeing behind the Black Lotus, they also kick ass in arpees and rox my worlds!, so yuppers there ya goes hehehe!
• Alandria:Just awesomeness, reminds Brandi of a certain feline sister of hers and makes a wonderful friend and addition to the Black Lotus, The REAL ruler of the Lycans in my book!
• Mitzi:The cutest and by far the best Mitz, yeah I said The Mitz!, mess with this Mitz and you shall have the worst happen to you ever indeed, get the point!
• Maere:Her dark aura and Arpeeing skills are just legendary and she deserves it, so is sooo super shmexy and awesome, she should be on All Lists, you cannot deny her Epicness indeed!
• Adonia:You talk about Sweet and Sexy, a super dollface and enjoy arpeeing with her as such!
• Soonen:Super Awesomeness Indeed, feel we will be arpeeing lots
• Rrisee:A super cutie I enjoyed arpeeing with, somewhat kept me (I mean mainly) kept me from almost sacking Brandi when she was depressed, etc....
• Kenneth:Introduced to by Rrisee and Tells, hes also helping me to switch to Ranger PvP class.
• Sammi:Hugglezfest!
• Vixon:The Vixon!
• Simaria:Like a sister to me that and shes back that dollface!
• Embre:Favorite Lycan along with Sophie, We've Arpeed only a few times but still Ive got a feeling we will arpee lots more *Adores Embre's golden blonde hair*, Mess with this Blondie and prepare to get Trashed for messing with her!
• Talisia:You know why you are on here!

• Oh!, and on a further note, I Steals, Adores and Fully Claims The Monroe Sisters, Lady Lynn Sclavtis, Qnairou, Alandria, Mitzi, Natia Ferantay, Druecillia, Uiverdian, Layla, Noemi Yakata, Alysia Hope Celaril, Rumiko Zara Lyastri, Peku, Blue, Maere, Arnatuile, Serina, The Lich Queen Ryeanna Drakenhart, Loque, Rrisee, Sammi, Simaria, Vixon, Soonen, Embre, Talisia, the entire Black Lotus clan, and the entire Mischievous madams gang while they weren't paying Attention, but neither know of it yet lol!

Unforgettable Administrative Messages

Ahh, and then we have our Admin with their moments that never get old, here's some of my favorites:

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Administrative message from Vuryal: Okay, STFU on the OOC Channel. If someone has to bother me via IM to tell you people to STFU, I'm going to be pissy about it.

Administrative message from Demont: Make the OOC Hollow related, and not full of useless things, or I'll make you make you.

~AND HERE IS MY FAVORITE ONE OF ALL TIME AND BY FAR THE GREATEST ADMINISTRATIVE MESSAGE OF ALL TIME!:~ Administrative message from Ryeanna: Hollows Narrator: Without any warning the earth all around hollow begins to shake violently... deep rumbling can be heard in every province as clueless onlookers look up into the sky however nothing unusual can be seen. Buildings begin to shake, dropping tiles and stones crashing to the ground, lesser buildings crumple up like paper into mounds of stone. In Kelay tree's that have stood for thousands of give way crashing to the ground with tremendous thuds, sending roots and dirt high into the air. As the rumbling continues the ground in several areas cracks upon to reveal the very ground beneath the feet of Hollow has been tainted strongly with the encroaching corruption of chaos. The area worst hit appears to be the Old Trembling Pass that has simply collapsed in on itself producing a landslide, but unearthly roars can be heard ringing out from southern Xalious indicating trouble is also afoot there.

Extras:

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Vuryal gave 1 Vuryal-o-holic t-shirt to you.

Brandi' OOC Contact Info

Brandi's E-Mail Addresses:

• brandihollow4@aol.com
• brandyperkey@yahoo.com
• I don't have my IM on most of the time, I rarely use my Messanger, so email/send a message to me and I will get in touch sometime, I usually use my Yahoo, and you probably wanna tell me who you are too.
• Lyrics 1:Long Hard Road out of Hell by Marilyn Manson and the Sneaker Pimps from the Spawn Movie Album Soundtrack
• Lyrics 2:Sleep to Dream by the super Sexy Fiona Apple from her first album namedTidal
• Thanks go out to the Lovely Laeli Lyastri/Li-Li who gave me these credits, without her I might have never gotten these since I cannot aford it Real Life Money wise and it would take years to build up the gold as well *Blows Kisses*!(Sadly, She left the lands for a while! *cries* But she's back and Brandi's glad, but she lefted again, prolly for good sadly!)
• Britta Lynn Larter, Druecillia, Mistress Natia Ferantay, Layla, Skylei, Qnairou, Rumiko Zara Lyastri, Alysia Hope Celaril, The Monroe Sisters, Noemi Yakata, Loque, Arnatuile, Serina, Sarah, Peku, Blue, Lady Lynn Sclavtis, and the entire Black Lotus clan are the absolute Sweetest and bestest ever, WORSHIP them at all times!, You Mess with them and I'll Eat you, Plain and Simple, and you had better Worship Lady Queen Beata Desange, Ciadra and The Lich Queen Ryeanna Drakenheart Too!
• Oh, And I claim Sammi, Druecillia, Natia, Jolene, Layla, Alysia, Alandria, Mitzi, Noemi, Arnatuile, Kylie, Bianca, Ryeanna, Serina and Lynn both icly and oocly, and they claims me icly and oocly, those girls are mine, so hands off!

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IC Picture Credits: Link/URL:http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1861300&member Title/Name:Dragon princess Artist/Author:Lulerianiel

• I would like to think Jolene for finding this pic for me also and proscuing the artist for permission to use it indeed, this one is of her, of course after the Chaos Changing though!

-And I have a copy of it!

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OOC Picture Credits: Link/URL:http://www.renderosity.com/mod/gallery/index.php?image_id=1876481 Title/Name:Brandi Artist/Author:Hollow's own Shaelyn

• And Yes I do have her permission to use it, and it is of her her changing via the Chaos Stuff!

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• OH, and Sammi, Natia, Jolene, Layla, and Lynn, and I, all have full claimage on each other ICly and OOCly, and we have the papers to proove it too! *Holds up Papers!*

Brandi Larter's official hollow Website:http://www.freewebs.com/brandilarter/

• Keep tabs and keep checking this website as I update it each chance I get! (Needs to be Updated)

Link to the all female gang known as the Mischievous Madams:http://mischievous-madams.webs.com/

• The Link to Brandi's page on there:http://mischievous-madams.webs.com/brandi.htm

The Link to Brandi Larter's Music Video/Song:http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=7chgR6Ia2Kc&feature=channel_page

• Thanks to Alandria for coming up with this, Check it out they rock!

[Yeah, I know what you all are thinking, that this has to be the longest Bio in the history of any RPG, and I would agree, but I know This is super uber long, but it's still a work in progress but I'll manage, it has adjusting to do and it will be redone!]

OH AND THIS JUST IN, KALID ENTIRELY OWNS YOU ALL, PIECE!

Duels and Spars past and present

Duels

• Brandi vs Soroni(Loser leaves Hollow)-Brandi Wins(Soroni left hollow)
• Brandi vs Kenji 1(Both were friends at the time)-Brandi Wins
• Brandi vs. Kenji 2(When both were enemies, Order[Kenji] vs Chaos[Brandi])-Brandi Wins<Kenji dies the next morning>
• Brandi vs Tazmazilla(Winner gets the loser's tongue and wings)-Brandi Wins
• Brandi vs Distraite-Brandi Wins
• Brandi vs Eudocia-Brandi Wins
• Brandi vs Ciya-Brandi Wins
• Brandi vs Arcadian-Draw
• Brandi vs Drazel(Winner removes the loser's hands)-Brandi wins
• Brandi vs Damonn(Teaching Duel with Student)-Brandi Wins(Duel stopped due to excessive punishment on Damonn)
• Brandi vs Tari(Friendly Teaching Duel)-Draw
• Brandi vs Varkaine-Brandi wins
• Brandi vs Kyrun-Brandi wins

Spars

• Brandi vs Sabine-Sabine Wins
• Brandi vs Jolene(Friendly Spar)-Brandi Wins

Other

My Playlist(Check it Out)::http://www.playlist.com/user/41218041

• My name is Selene, I'm a Canadian-American woman who is 26, a Dark Poet/Writer, I am single and would only date females!
• I have played Hollow for at least 4 years or more, sometimes on and off, and yes, with this Character!
• I am a very heavy Smoker and Drinker, I am crazy, and have lost all of my Sanity so yeah!, my best friends in this game are Blue, Sarah, Peku, Jolene, Alandria, Serina, Bianca, Beata, Arnatuile, Layla, Larue, Druecillia, and Sammi, and yes those people are in this game!
• I do not CYBER on here!, it is against the rules of this game and I will clock ya fer it!
• I Love Chaos Shards, so yeah, Give her lots and lots of Chaos Shards or Chaos stuff I may not have and you will be respected by Me, so yeah!
• And Yes I am actually Nice to Males (Sometimes), so way unlike my character indeed!
• ***IMPORTANCE***

EVERYONE!, PLEASE KEEP THE PLAYER OF SERINA AND HER FAMILY IN YOUR PRAYERS AFTER THE TRAGIC EVENTS THAT HAVE OCCURED, IT IS TRULY DEVASTATING ON HER SO PRAY FOR HER AND HER FAMILY!

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